going to be honest lad, could of done a bit more with the joke, like when he did hit the fruit the police burst in and beating the character up and then sent him to jail with a large "big Bubba" fruitman next to him
i really do like this Brandon, the comedic time is quite good and the quality of your style is a lot of fun.
the characters work well with each other, Brandon's over quirky silliness and breaking the 4th wall, Jake's straight-man routine and being serious with the things at hand.
the overprotective police dad was a good foil for the group but i do feel like the voice doesn't match up with the design.
though my problem is that the reaction of the characters is kinda lacking, like when the characters get cartoonic mad, i feel like the expression should look like that.
other then that this is a pretty good animation
DANG IT EGGMAN!!! WE JUST FIXED THAT MOON
not bad, not bad at all. for a first flash in newgrounds, you got all out on this one
not bad, noticed you happen to like spazkid's style of animation and colorazation. not a bad thing by any means, it does suit the oddness of the animation
this would of bein good as a testing animation, i forgot with the style of they thing you did, i think it was pencil something, but the premise is using this style to make actions and movements in a blank slate (no background). had potential but choose an easy way out, try this type oif animation again but make it longer, i can see it going well
did the credits just mention Jontron's pokemon Pumbloom??
well this slapstck was welldone, great job
i do wonder if you are going to make a longer episode (not a complaint but a compliment)
this is beautifully crafted, the lines, the scenario, esp the dream world.
its also very sad, the music really somes it up. plus with a bittersweet ending like that, i really teared up. i am able to speak and understand spanish, but can only keep up a small conversation, but i understood the subtitles, without the need for the tranlation.
this is one of the times that the atmosphere is the best part, sometimes the falling of leaves is more powerful then the plight of the hero. i can't wait for more from you
Thanks for your full review my friend. I'll keep working :)
MTV in the modern age. i chuckled, and i now cry because MTV is a crapfest now when it IS suppose to be about music, not dumb people doing dumb stuff
normally i detest stick figures, but it's that style that is underapperciated or turned a blind eye. after see thing short i feel like going to stickpage for more of these types of videos
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